She remembered so well the July day she had arrived. She looked awful, and the black dress she'd thought so sophisticated and understated had understated her so much she was practically invisible. Your characters are so stereotyped. 'She's magic,' said Declan.
'You arrogant, pig-headed Irish asshole,' yelled Cameron. 'You want to pack me in?' she whispered. As he drew her into the house out of the sight of any lurking press, she fell into his arms. 'And he was around all the time, and you were away, or preoccupied with the franchise or Yeats, and Mum was probably turned on because the whole thing was so utterly verboten.
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